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Tuesday, 17 December 2019

Day 2 - #1 Space Poem


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora George

    Thanks for an excellent poem - I had just responded to another student's post for this activity and I explained how I would feel overwhelmed seeing other planets from that perspective! So glad that someone thinks about the same thing.

    I like how you've mentioned the trampoline - why do you compare this feeling of jumping on the trampoline to jumping on the moon?

    Cheers,
    Jordan

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  2. Hey George,
    Its me Christopher.
    Great to see your still blogging!
    Your poem is great! Also just like you if I go on the moon I would love to see the different planets and stars.

    But do you know the depth of each hole?
    Do you have a trampoline?

    Besides that your doing a great job! Keep it up!

    Malo Aupito
    Christopher

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