Thursday, 7 September 2017

Animals in the Zoo Writing


  1. hey there George me Malachi i like your intro its a good reason why animals(wild animals) should stay in the zoo really good work keep it up

  2. Hi my name is Jazmyn I would like to read your writing but the link does not work for me can you make the link work

  3. Hey George, my name is Billy and I am from the Summer Learning Journey programme. I look forward to blogging with you this summer.

    I hope you are having a nice and relaxing holiday.

    This is a good piece of writing, I like how you consider the animal's safety. I guess in the zoo they wouldn't be in danger of getting caught by poachers.

    Thanks, Billy