I am a Year 7 student at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space. My teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Hi George, That is a very interesting piece of writing. Just make sure to reread your writing and make sure you write your conclusion cause I want to read it. Nice Writing!
Hi George, I think that your writing tells me a lot about why you would want a PS4, which is so that you could play Fortnite with your friends. Although this is a good reason to buy a PS4 you could also explain about the game and why you would want to play it. Next time before you publish your writing you could proofread and make sure that everything makes sense.
Hi George,
ReplyDeleteThat is a very interesting piece of writing. Just make sure to reread your writing and make sure you write your conclusion cause I want to read it.
Nice Writing!
Hi George,
ReplyDeleteI think that your writing tells me a lot about why you would want a PS4, which is so that you could play Fortnite with your friends. Although this is a good reason to buy a PS4 you could also explain about the game and why you would want to play it. Next time before you publish your writing you could proofread and make sure that everything makes sense.
Mikaela
Hi George,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing and I like to play fortnite as well maybe some day we can play fortnite duos.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!